課本上的討論問題也可以擴充成段落寫作的好材料喔!

到了高三,當然要找所有的機會寫作大爆發才行!想方設法把寫作和各種東西送作堆!XD
所以當老師我看到課本的討論問題時,立馬又動腦筋到寫作任務啦哈哈哈!
一定要的啦!因為那一題是請學生描述一位成功人士,這太適合用來做一個人物描寫的小段落了!只是啊!談論成功人士很容易變成陳腔爛調,於是老師我就把a successful person改成了a role model of yours啦!這樣應該會有比較多元的產出吧!
這裡當然首要就是要孩子可以去結合課文裡描寫的那些美德,但這當然都是有彈性的,如果那位role model有別的強項,也都可以的!
其次當然就是要一再的去強化"完整段落結構"的概念!但這千萬不能只講概念但不提供範例或是鷹架!所以當然又是找AI小幫手啦!這回我找Gemini(因為廢話較少!),prompt如下:

You are a high school English teacher teaching writing 101 to English learners. You would like to create some model paragraphs describing someone's role model so that your students know what to follow and imitate. You also put brackets around some main ideas and details in the paragraph because you would like your students to replace the ideas and the details in the brackets with their own.

Voila! Gemini就生出了挺簡單好用的一個有方框括弧的範本段落,超讚的:
**Model Paragraph: A Role Model**

[Name] is a person who I admire greatly. [Describe how you know this person].  [He/She/They] possesses qualities that I aspire to emulate. [Give specific examples of the person's qualities]. One particular incident that solidified [his/her/their] status as a role model in my life was [describe a specific event]. This experience taught me the importance of [quality]. [Explain how this quality has influenced you]. Because of [him/her/them], I have a newfound appreciation for [value]. 

我也問過Claude,不過出來的東西有點太冗長,所以還是採取Gemini給的版本!
不過這就是我常常會做的事:貨比至少兩家!做點比較還真的還蠻有趣的!
接著我就把這個model paragraph稍事整理,放在Google Classroom的問問題作業,就可以準備上課讓小孩又可以寫個至少五分鐘啦!
結果發現小孩一有這個架構協助,每個人都文思泉湧(其實是被老師虐出來的?)!寫了一大堆還不停手!害得老師我只好趕緊說:Don't write a book! Just keep it short!  XDDD
但必須說,小孩產出的東西還真的不錯呢!至少是完整的段落,有模有樣的!
以往如果是想要去調整課本裡的學習任務,都要自己慢慢的生學習單內容,現在,老師有了想法,再找AI小幫手協作,真的很方便,孩子也可以得到更多的幫助和合適的支持!
今年教寫作,有AI小秘書,小幫手,實在是太舒暢了啊!


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  1. 謝謝中如老師不藏私地分享~想請問老師回收學生們答案,是用google表單嗎?學生們有機會看到彼此的作品嗎?先謝謝老師抽空回覆

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    1. 老師您好!我是用Google Classroom裡的問題作業功能,如貼文裡的附圖所示,學生只要繳交自己的答案,就可以看到其他同學的作品了!

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